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Wake_up. by ~BladeAce:iconBladeAce:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Cyber Poetry




:Sys_idle...>Dream>Peace...
              <Disillusionment.exe< Run=Wake_up.exe
                >save/temp= Dream.dre;=."Far away..."
Run.Task= Human A.I.exe.Remember...<
      Temp."It was far away... Not here..."
>Instinct.dll
                  >Scratch>
                                 Open-Eyes/Recognize/
Run.dll>Time>Clock/
                               5:45 A.M.
/
>User:Action>Strech>"Tired..."
              Move/Hand/move/to=Face/"Ugh...Monday..."
>Move=Sheet/.)
     >Run:"C:/Instinct/Hungry/Food/Breakfast/"
Save.Temp;/"That Dream.." Clean=Temp./Dream.dre/
   End.Task/Wake_up.exe/
         UserOverride/New/Tab/Task/
C:/Documents/Input/="Hey get up!" Recognition.exe/speak/
"Ugh..I'm up..."
C:/Run/Task/Morning.exe/ "Good Morning"
D:/Run.dll/Day;
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Author's Comments

Inspired by the movie - THX 1138 by George Lucas

In this poem I am tyring to relate how a computers' start up registry runs and the human mind wakes from a dream.


"Dream.dre" is a dream file ;P

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~Cheaster Aug 7, 2006, 4:58:48 PM
Great work. ;)

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"No matter how hard you try, because in the end, it doesen't even matter."

"Kameko will always be in my heart"
:iconbladeace:
~BladeAce Aug 7, 2006, 5:07:52 PM
Thanks :)

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My enemies are without Honor. I bring them only Vengeance.. and Death.
:iconcheaster:
~Cheaster Aug 7, 2006, 5:41:13 PM
Anytime. :aww:

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"No matter how hard you try, because in the end, it doesen't even matter."

"Kameko will always be in my heart"
:iconashleigha:
=ashleigha Aug 7, 2006, 9:51:49 PM
:lmao: thats fucking wicked welcome to the life of a nerd

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<:halfliquid:´¯`¤•¤´¯`¤•AshleighA•¤´¯`¤•¤´¯`:halfliquid:>
:iconbladeace:
~BladeAce Aug 7, 2006, 10:06:03 PM
Yes i am 8D

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My enemies are without Honor. I bring them only Vengeance.. and Death.
:iconashleigha:
=ashleigha Aug 7, 2006, 10:18:55 PM
:P

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<:halfliquid:´¯`¤•¤´¯`¤•AshleighA•¤´¯`¤•¤´¯`:halfliquid:>
:iconhector42:
~Hector42 Aug 8, 2006, 9:17:10 AM
I love such things...sometimes I play in e-mails with this, but then nobody understands me :lol: ...however, you are much more skilled in this. :D :+fav:

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*nnff*
:iconbladeace:
~BladeAce Aug 8, 2006, 2:43:46 PM
well i sometimes can not orginize my thoughts as well in words so code does the trick lol Im still experamenting with this style :D
thanks

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My enemies are without Honor. I bring them only Vengeance.. and Death.
:iconhomunculo-feliz:
~homunculo-feliz Aug 9, 2006, 6:02:47 PM
It's the first time I see a cyber poem...
I love this kinda experiments, your work is great.
I've been trying things like this, but i suck, really suck. Besides, i don't like so much writing poetry in english.
But this is fantastic!
:iconbladeace:
~BladeAce Aug 10, 2006, 2:46:35 PM
Thank you very much. I find that while frequently writting poerty I sometimes cant put in to words a moment that I want to express. So, as good practice wtih my html skills, I try to express that in code via what I believe a computer would make of it and write it down in the form that I think it might make of it. Just keep at it I'm sure you can get better at it. ^_^

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My enemies are without Honor. I bring them only Vengeance.. and Death.
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